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view from outside in by ~hillanbutt:iconhillanbutt:



walking away from you
-I feel stronger
hoping you notice it
-won't wiat longer
tired of missing you
-time to look forward
still don't want to lose you
-want so much

if you want to keep
-can't help but ask
make you're decision
-this better be fast
not on what you want now
-don't care about trivial time
but what you'll want then
-bet you'll leave me behind

it's not taht I don't care for you
-these words come to me slow
it's not that I'm not here for you
-something I need you to know
but it doesn't make much sense to me
-mostly nothing does
to stay here when I'm not what you need
-oh how I wish I was

see cuz from my point of view
-I keep track of all this in my head
there's no excuse for what you do
-my frustration's easily fed
it's obviouse to everyone else
-I really think it's stupid
to not let go of what you should
-why can't you udnerstand this?

it's pretty plain to everyone else
-you are so hard to convince
that you keep chosing your own hell
-it's tough to keep my patience
you stay locked up in this
-it's getting on my nerves
I'm not feeling you on my lips
-I clinch my teeth as tempers surge

ended up with so much less
-expected way too much agian
too bed I'm too quick to invest
-I guess I'll tell you this is the end
©2004-2009 ~hillanbutt
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Interesting. And yeah, it conveyed well. Doubled the point?
um..wow, love springs to mind!!!! you get my first ever :lick:

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Masquerade and revel in your opulence.
Writhe unfettered by your stabs at ignorance.
Swim through hues and whispered tones of heresy,
A dozen strokes to run your blood cold enough to believe
Remember me?
Your first ever what . . . ??? That face? A lick?
*shrugs* . . . I forever have mixed feelings about everything . . .
yep, first lick

--
Masquerade and revel in your opulence.
Writhe unfettered by your stabs at ignorance.
Swim through hues and whispered tones of heresy,
A dozen strokes to run your blood cold enough to believe
Remember me?
oh, well thanks there, buddy

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